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I love your Mortal Kombat-esque levels of brutality. Please take a crack at my channel when you get a chance. Thanks.
Regarding point [2].Please watch this video
Also it just looks better when looking at all your video
[9].lol you might wanna reword that playlist xD
[10] yeah sorry i didnot really check out the description and my guess would be around an hour and a half?
also....whynot just make it a NORMAL letsplay cutting out any boring bits.i assume there is fighting in that game so why not just do a normal letsplay and upload like a 15min video.i am sure people would rather watch that than watching something you literally cant even keep track of
Well.. That first run took 6-7 hours.
That game is an incremental game, so there isn't much to it. But don't worry. I am sorting out the team that is on Gaming-Simplified and different games will be uploaded in the future, with commentary.
I would absolutely love for you to take a look at my channel I know I need to update my banner, but anything else you see?
I know I need to update my banner, but anything else you see?
As the title says...i am going to review anyone who comments on this thread
Bare in mind i am going to be Honest and not going to sugar coat anything.i will say what i think of your channel which can be something very nice or something very bad (Of course i am NOT going to say something like "get cancer"...thats just faaaaaar past rude XD,also i am human XD)
Please comment down and ASK me to review your channel (It is kinda the nice thing to do here XD) and please please please dont comment something "I posted a thread in this section for my channel.Please look at that".lol i am not gonna go search for that thread XD
Also....IF (Only IF,not forcing you guys XD ) you guys want to,then please check out my channel and tell me what you guys thought of it
Hey dude, could you please review my channel, and possibly my latest video? I'd greatly appreciate it, and I love honesty! (which I can see in your reviews)
Thank you in advance bro
Looking for general feed back on my channel at https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCKspqH67OyaHU6c8l-_R8aQ Please slaughter me I want ot know how to improve my channel
ok sorry if i mess this up coz this is the first time i am using Spoilers...soooo yeeeeeah
I dont want to spam this thread and hence wan to make one post for all 7 of you who have asked
lol i got 4 more to review.which i will do tomorrow coz it is like 3 AM here xD
I dont want to spam this thread and hence wan to make one post for all 7 of you who have asked
1.You have a good channel logo however you need to improve your banner a little more.It seems too simple
2.You need to add a trailer or atleast a video that best describes your channel.Yes i know you already have one up but that video isnt the best type to put up.i would recommend some sort of funny moments or montage of some sort
3.your homepage is kinda empty so add some stuff in there...you have some awesome playlists so put them up there (lol dont clutter up your homepage though).
4.Your thumbnails are quite a mix there xD.seriously....you thumbnails were either too simple (taking a screenshot of the game and put some text on it using the arial font) or were not readable (dark background with dark wordings (an example would be the thumbnail for "I Broke The Game - Joy Of Creation:Reborn",it is obvious you wrote something above the name of the game in thumbnail but it is very hard to tell what it is )).You have to improve the thumbnails and also try to use brighter stuff so that it is easier to read from far (just not tooo bright otherwise it literally becomes a pain to read xD)
5.your videos are quite entertaining to watch...especially the collabs with bubba but you have to reduce everyone else's volumes so that your voice stands out in the video.Honestly,first when i went to your channel i actually thought that you were bubba(because his voice is more loud)
So seriously....either increase your sound or decrease everyone else's through whichever editing software you use
6.Add more things to describe yourself in your About Section.adding phases to your description does not exactly count xD. However,good touch with the Join The Wolf Pack.it makes it kinda personal
7.Your audio was fine but i felt that the treble was high which might have been a sideaffect to removing noise so probably add a little bass to your audio using audacity or any software you use to record your audio
8.add your videos to your playlists and also make new playlists if needed (which you can put on your homepage)
9.Overall i would give you channel a 6.
You will improve overtime so dont worry
2.You need to add a trailer or atleast a video that best describes your channel.Yes i know you already have one up but that video isnt the best type to put up.i would recommend some sort of funny moments or montage of some sort
3.your homepage is kinda empty so add some stuff in there...you have some awesome playlists so put them up there (lol dont clutter up your homepage though).
4.Your thumbnails are quite a mix there xD.seriously....you thumbnails were either too simple (taking a screenshot of the game and put some text on it using the arial font) or were not readable (dark background with dark wordings (an example would be the thumbnail for "I Broke The Game - Joy Of Creation:Reborn",it is obvious you wrote something above the name of the game in thumbnail but it is very hard to tell what it is )).You have to improve the thumbnails and also try to use brighter stuff so that it is easier to read from far (just not tooo bright otherwise it literally becomes a pain to read xD)
5.your videos are quite entertaining to watch...especially the collabs with bubba but you have to reduce everyone else's volumes so that your voice stands out in the video.Honestly,first when i went to your channel i actually thought that you were bubba(because his voice is more loud)
So seriously....either increase your sound or decrease everyone else's through whichever editing software you use
6.Add more things to describe yourself in your About Section.adding phases to your description does not exactly count xD. However,good touch with the Join The Wolf Pack.it makes it kinda personal
7.Your audio was fine but i felt that the treble was high which might have been a sideaffect to removing noise so probably add a little bass to your audio using audacity or any software you use to record your audio
8.add your videos to your playlists and also make new playlists if needed (which you can put on your homepage)
9.Overall i would give you channel a 6.
You will improve overtime so dont worry
1.Good channel logo,baaaad banner.well in a way it does go with the theme of your channel but the banner was waaaaaaaay too simple,
2.Your trailer was good but it would be better if you had more to say about your channel other than your catchphrase (which might i add,is very very catchy and good).
3.Your thumbnails were quite good.i loved how they were similar in certain ways yet completely different.
4.Your audio was fine and i could understand everything you said quite clearly,thats a win right there xD
5.Your homepage felt a little cluttered,i would highly recommend just keeping the playlists you feel are the best rather than all the playlists you have
6.good job with the playlists.you have categorized all your videos which people like me (who love to binge watch YT videos) will reeeeallly appreciate
7.You havent used cards properly in your videos..you do know that you can add upto 5 of them.regardless of whether you have a video before the current in the same series,you can always add other videos
8.and lastly,your About section was very professional
8.5 - ok this is kind of a personal thing but i feel that you should be a little more enthusiastic in your videos...i dont know why,i just couldnt feel the it
9.Overall i would give your channel only a 8
2.Your trailer was good but it would be better if you had more to say about your channel other than your catchphrase (which might i add,is very very catchy and good).
3.Your thumbnails were quite good.i loved how they were similar in certain ways yet completely different.
4.Your audio was fine and i could understand everything you said quite clearly,thats a win right there xD
5.Your homepage felt a little cluttered,i would highly recommend just keeping the playlists you feel are the best rather than all the playlists you have
6.good job with the playlists.you have categorized all your videos which people like me (who love to binge watch YT videos) will reeeeallly appreciate
7.You havent used cards properly in your videos..you do know that you can add upto 5 of them.regardless of whether you have a video before the current in the same series,you can always add other videos
8.and lastly,your About section was very professional
8.5 - ok this is kind of a personal thing but i feel that you should be a little more enthusiastic in your videos...i dont know why,i just couldnt feel the it
9.Overall i would give your channel only a 8
well there really isnt much i can tell about your channel seeing as how you have like 2 videos up buuut
I liked the logo,banner and trailer/theme songs
The theme song was weirdly catchy...i dont know why xD
lol were you trying for an art style similar to southpark coz it seemed that way,i liked the character models however your animation skills need improvement
like i said there really wasnt much i could tell about your channel...so sorry about that
I liked the logo,banner and trailer/theme songs
The theme song was weirdly catchy...i dont know why xD
lol were you trying for an art style similar to southpark coz it seemed that way,i liked the character models however your animation skills need improvement
like i said there really wasnt much i could tell about your channel...so sorry about that
Only an 8? Dude, with your level of honesty and scrutiny, I'll happily take an 8. You made my day pal, thank you.
As the title says...i am going to review anyone who comments on this thread
Bare in mind i am going to be Honest and not going to sugar coat anything.i will say what i think of your channel which can be something very nice or something very bad (Of course i am NOT going to say something like "get cancer"...thats just faaaaaar past rude XD,also i am human XD)
Please comment down and ASK me to review your channel (It is kinda the nice thing to do here XD) and please please please dont comment something "I posted a thread in this section for my channel.Please look at that".lol i am not gonna go search for that thread XD
Also....IF (Only IF,not forcing you guys XD ) you guys want to,then please check out my channel and tell me what you guys thought of it
Hey bro really appreciate you doing this, here is my latest video im reading for some good constructive criticism
As the title says...i am going to review anyone who comments on this thread
Bare in mind i am going to be Honest and not going to sugar coat anything.i will say what i think of your channel which can be something very nice or something very bad (Of course i am NOT going to say something like "get cancer"...thats just faaaaaar past rude XD,also i am human XD)
Please comment down and ASK me to review your channel (It is kinda the nice thing to do here XD) and please please please dont comment something "I posted a thread in this section for my channel.Please look at that".lol i am not gonna go search for that thread XD
Also....IF (Only IF,not forcing you guys XD ) you guys want to,then please check out my channel and tell me what you guys thought of it
I am totally suing you for that title, xD
loooool sorry i honestly forgot that you had a series with a similar name
However.....yours is called Reviews4You and mine is Reviews For You
On a serious note,can still keep the name,if not then feel free to change it to whatever you want (xD just make sure the title tells people free reviews or something)
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No don't be silly, i was just messing aroundloooool sorry i honestly forgot that you had a series with a similar name
However.....yours is called Reviews4You and mine is Reviews For You
On a serious note,can still keep the name,if not then feel free to change it to whatever you want (xD just make sure the title tells people free reviews or something)
I love what you're doing! 
ok guys sorry for being late but i decided to have a sort of system so that i dont end up spamming this thread
I will use spoilers so that i can get all of you done in one post rather than 7
Alright guys thats it and now i am sorry if anyone replies requesting for a review coz next i will do a mass review when i have about 5 requests
I will use spoilers so that i can get all of you done in one post rather than 7
1.Channel Logo - I really liked your logo...kinda seemed like an angel,good touch with that BTW
2.Channel Banner - It really isnt good coz it seems like a child made it.Also if you do make another banner then please dont make the Like-Share-Subscribe so much prominent that it taks the focus away from your channel name.Lastly.I liked the style/Font you used but i feel you can do much better
3.Audio - Very good audio however you do a slightly strong accent(no offense),well it is also possible that I could not understand it but someone else might be able to,so i wouldnt worry much about the slightly strong accent you have.also your audio quality improved like crazy in 3 videos you recently uploaded
4.Other Info - ok firstly i liked how you tried to include your audience in your story time video and secondly,interesting into(how did you even get the wings part coz i am pretty sure that there is no template with wings)
5.Thumbnails - You an defiantly do better.Your thumbnails are like a 5/10.also....add a thumbnail to your recent video xD (the one where you show the editing process of your video)
6.Playlists - i see you do infact have playlists however you have over a 100 videos and yet there are only 12 videos categorized....serious dude thats like 10% of your videos in playlists xD.Fill up your playlists!
7.Channel Trailer - essentially you do have one but i really wouldnt count that as a trailer.Usually i do say put a video you feel describes you best if you cant make a trailer but dude....change your "trailer"
8.About Section - You need to improve the about section.adding about one sentence (quite literally)to describe your channel does not count xD
Also.The About Section is about YOUR channel,i dont think it is necessary to add your crew's channel links in there,You have kept their links in the homepage,which is enough xD
9.Homepage - EMPTY!.I know you have like only 4 playlists (which is not good coz i know you can make more playlist for the various games you play like Happy wheels...etc) but you cant leave your Homepage essentially empty,ADD THEM IN,Dont be shy
10.Overall Score - dude i am sorry but your score is 5/10
lol initially it was 4 but then Point 4 bumped it up to 5
You have quite a few issues which i know your can resolve
2.Channel Banner - It really isnt good coz it seems like a child made it.Also if you do make another banner then please dont make the Like-Share-Subscribe so much prominent that it taks the focus away from your channel name.Lastly.I liked the style/Font you used but i feel you can do much better
3.Audio - Very good audio however you do a slightly strong accent(no offense),well it is also possible that I could not understand it but someone else might be able to,so i wouldnt worry much about the slightly strong accent you have.also your audio quality improved like crazy in 3 videos you recently uploaded
4.Other Info - ok firstly i liked how you tried to include your audience in your story time video and secondly,interesting into(how did you even get the wings part coz i am pretty sure that there is no template with wings)
5.Thumbnails - You an defiantly do better.Your thumbnails are like a 5/10.also....add a thumbnail to your recent video xD (the one where you show the editing process of your video)
6.Playlists - i see you do infact have playlists however you have over a 100 videos and yet there are only 12 videos categorized....serious dude thats like 10% of your videos in playlists xD.Fill up your playlists!
7.Channel Trailer - essentially you do have one but i really wouldnt count that as a trailer.Usually i do say put a video you feel describes you best if you cant make a trailer but dude....change your "trailer"
8.About Section - You need to improve the about section.adding about one sentence (quite literally)to describe your channel does not count xD
Also.The About Section is about YOUR channel,i dont think it is necessary to add your crew's channel links in there,You have kept their links in the homepage,which is enough xD
9.Homepage - EMPTY!.I know you have like only 4 playlists (which is not good coz i know you can make more playlist for the various games you play like Happy wheels...etc) but you cant leave your Homepage essentially empty,ADD THEM IN,Dont be shy
10.Overall Score - dude i am sorry but your score is 5/10
lol initially it was 4 but then Point 4 bumped it up to 5
You have quite a few issues which i know your can resolve
sorry dude i really cant say much about your channel coz i dont speak....eeeer......i want to say,spanish? or latin? or russian?...lol seriously...i am sorry if i got it wrong;and also the fact that your havent post anything in literally a whole year
However i can comment on the visuals and honestly....I like it
you have a decent logo however the banner template you chose might have been the wrong choice for your channel coz from what i can understand,your channel is more of a "Top games" kinda thing.
However i can comment on the visuals and honestly....I like it
you have a decent logo however the banner template you chose might have been the wrong choice for your channel coz from what i can understand,your channel is more of a "Top games" kinda thing.
1.Channel Logo - I really liked your logo
2.Channel Banner - You can defiantly do better with your banner. it seems too simple (well it kinda is coz all you did was add a line next to your logo)
3.Audio - very good quality and very clear
4.Other Info - i was quite surprisd to find out that you have about 1.8k followers on Twitch but only have like 200 subs on youtube....that was a little weird
5.Thumbnails - very good thumbnails...quite eye catching.however some of them are a little dull (the background of the thumbnail that is)
6.Playlists - very good status
7.Channel Trailer - needs improvement.well i wouldnt really call that a trailer,so either make one or choose a better video
8.About Section - nice and professional...good job
9.Homepage - NOT ENOUGH!...you have some good playlists dude,dont be shy to add them to your homepage
10.Overall Score - dude you deserve a decent 9/10
Honestly,your dont really have alll that much to improve but you do have a couple
2.Channel Banner - You can defiantly do better with your banner. it seems too simple (well it kinda is coz all you did was add a line next to your logo)
3.Audio - very good quality and very clear
4.Other Info - i was quite surprisd to find out that you have about 1.8k followers on Twitch but only have like 200 subs on youtube....that was a little weird
5.Thumbnails - very good thumbnails...quite eye catching.however some of them are a little dull (the background of the thumbnail that is)
6.Playlists - very good status
7.Channel Trailer - needs improvement.well i wouldnt really call that a trailer,so either make one or choose a better video
8.About Section - nice and professional...good job
9.Homepage - NOT ENOUGH!...you have some good playlists dude,dont be shy to add them to your homepage
10.Overall Score - dude you deserve a decent 9/10
Honestly,your dont really have alll that much to improve but you do have a couple
i totally understand the fact that you are new to youtube and all but hey you have got to start improving somewhere and this is that place
1.Channel Logo - very good and creative logo
2.Channel Banner - it is a good banner but i feel you should add your channel nam in there as well
3.Audio - you have a good and clear audio but i think it would be best to increase the volume through whichever editing software you use
4.Other Info - xD i noticed you kinda messed up with the thumbnail for your Overwatch video coz you showed Osu! in the thumbnail...isnt that a japanese game?
5.Thumbnails - you have a nice theme to your thumbnails but for the first few vids you uploaded,it is very hard to read the blue text(because it is small and because of the colour ())
6.Playlists - well....you did use the playlists right...cant deny that xD
7.Channel Trailer - YOU DONT HAVEONE!!??OMG.lol JK,but seriously you do need a channel trailer or atleast a video that feels best describes your channel (i would highly recommend going for the former over the latter)
8.About Section - Not good enough.you literally added one tiny line of info.The About section should describe your channel to your viewers and putting one line of info is defiantly not a good choice for that
9.Homepage - empty and need alooot of improvement.As i mentioned earlier,add a channel trailer so that new people know what to expect from your channel.Next you need to add your own playlists (or someone else's,if you are doing Playlist4Playlist) and probably change the Uploads setting to show your videos horizontally rather than vertically
10.Overall Score - Overall i would give you only a 4/10
Hey getting a 4 for a channel that started like a week ago is kinda good.like i said you are quite new and hence you need to start improving somewhere
1.Channel Logo - very good and creative logo
2.Channel Banner - it is a good banner but i feel you should add your channel nam in there as well
3.Audio - you have a good and clear audio but i think it would be best to increase the volume through whichever editing software you use
4.Other Info - xD i noticed you kinda messed up with the thumbnail for your Overwatch video coz you showed Osu! in the thumbnail...isnt that a japanese game?
5.Thumbnails - you have a nice theme to your thumbnails but for the first few vids you uploaded,it is very hard to read the blue text(because it is small and because of the colour ())
6.Playlists - well....you did use the playlists right...cant deny that xD
7.Channel Trailer - YOU DONT HAVEONE!!??OMG.lol JK,but seriously you do need a channel trailer or atleast a video that feels best describes your channel (i would highly recommend going for the former over the latter)
8.About Section - Not good enough.you literally added one tiny line of info.The About section should describe your channel to your viewers and putting one line of info is defiantly not a good choice for that
9.Homepage - empty and need alooot of improvement.As i mentioned earlier,add a channel trailer so that new people know what to expect from your channel.Next you need to add your own playlists (or someone else's,if you are doing Playlist4Playlist) and probably change the Uploads setting to show your videos horizontally rather than vertically
10.Overall Score - Overall i would give you only a 4/10
Hey getting a 4 for a channel that started like a week ago is kinda good.like i said you are quite new and hence you need to start improving somewhere
As per your request,i will review your video
Honestly i am not a sports fan in anyway...literally,i dont like playing sports related games xD
However i did like yours.you were constantly commentating like a pro commentator at a stadium
Your audio was perfectly fine however while adding sound effects and songs(like the last 2 played at 8 mins) you might have forgotten to take their volumes down coz while they were playing i coul barely understand a word you were saying
all in all it was a good video
Honestly i am not a sports fan in anyway...literally,i dont like playing sports related games xD
However i did like yours.you were constantly commentating like a pro commentator at a stadium
Your audio was perfectly fine however while adding sound effects and songs(like the last 2 played at 8 mins) you might have forgotten to take their volumes down coz while they were playing i coul barely understand a word you were saying
all in all it was a good video
1.Channel Logo - Good logo
2.Channel Banner - i say you could easily do much better that what you have now (what you have now is good but is literally just your logo with some characters in it)
3.Audio - ok i dont know what to say about this because i checked out 2 of your videos and both had efferent people as the commentary(one who spoke really close to the mic and the other with a poor mic) so cant really say much
4.Other Info - your channel looks sooo new (which is baaaaaaaaaad) and yet you have about 115 subs which is surprising
5.Thumbnails - at first i thought you reused thumbnails constantly but on further inspection i found out that you changed a few words and the BG pick.Your style of thumbnails isnt the best but it isnt bad either
6.Playlists - well you have playlists however i think about 10 videos of your are not put into the playlists.so work on that
7.Channel Trailer - a setup tour does not count as a trailer -_- . it kinda seems like you are trying to rub it in our faces
Add a proper trailer
8.About Section - ADD SOME TEXT!.Wow seriously....how do you expect people to know anythig about your channel
9.Homepage - EMPTY!!.Dude fill up the homepage...i dont know why you even deleted the Uploads section from the homepage but seriously add some playlists in there
10.Overall Score - Overall i would give you a 4/10
mostly i was confused with a couple of things so i couldnt really give you a decent review
2.Channel Banner - i say you could easily do much better that what you have now (what you have now is good but is literally just your logo with some characters in it)
3.Audio - ok i dont know what to say about this because i checked out 2 of your videos and both had efferent people as the commentary(one who spoke really close to the mic and the other with a poor mic) so cant really say much
4.Other Info - your channel looks sooo new (which is baaaaaaaaaad) and yet you have about 115 subs which is surprising
5.Thumbnails - at first i thought you reused thumbnails constantly but on further inspection i found out that you changed a few words and the BG pick.Your style of thumbnails isnt the best but it isnt bad either
6.Playlists - well you have playlists however i think about 10 videos of your are not put into the playlists.so work on that
7.Channel Trailer - a setup tour does not count as a trailer -_- . it kinda seems like you are trying to rub it in our faces
Add a proper trailer
8.About Section - ADD SOME TEXT!.Wow seriously....how do you expect people to know anythig about your channel
9.Homepage - EMPTY!!.Dude fill up the homepage...i dont know why you even deleted the Uploads section from the homepage but seriously add some playlists in there
10.Overall Score - Overall i would give you a 4/10
mostly i was confused with a couple of things so i couldnt really give you a decent review
Hey man, I really appreciate what you're doing here. That being said, we would love a review from you!
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Thanks again, and we will be checking your channel out
www.YouTube.com/TMWNFH
Thanks again, and we will be checking your channel out