Thank you for the review and your insight.
I don't think i am faking it! When I record my mind just too intro the game and I enjoy the game so much that's my reaction!Dude i dont know what to say.....you were waaaaaaaaay too energetic,dont get me wrong ,being energetic is nice but you were just too damn energetic to a point where it felt fake and forced and believe me you SHOULD NOT be fake or act forced in your videos.Its kinda clear you are trying to be Jacksepticeye there with the screaming,but remember less is always good too
The commentary however was quite good so kudos on that dude
GenfordGaming
1.Channel Logo - Good logo
2.Channel Banner/Art - Great Banner,really simple yet awesome
3.Audio - Nice and clean...i could understand almost everything you said
4.Other Info - xD really liked the intro (The song you used was one of my fav songs xD)
5.Thumbnails - some of your thumbnails were great however the great ones were used for multiple videos which is not good...the rest were fine but werent really eye catching and or were dull
6.Playlists - well...you categorized your videos..thats good
7.Channel Trailer - Dude while you did have an actual Channel Trailer, i really would not call it a Channel Trailer rather just a Trailer for like a movie or something...the trailer should have been short and sweet which it wasnt exactly....Talk in your trailer rather than having gameplay footage and relaying on good editing skills
8.Description - Nice and descriptive description...good job
9.Homepage - It was quite well balanced however i feel you should have added some extra playlists in there
10.Overall Score - Overall i would give your channel an 8/10
and by the way I made the logo and banner for MultiSpiderFish. I am a graphic designer by profession 
Fair enough
lol checked out the comments section and right off the bat i was like....reaaaaalllly -_-
Oh,thats cool...His Banner was really good so kudos to you dudeThanks for the review Ill make some changes
OK well its really awesome that you grew soo fast,you have like 20 subs in only 20 days and your channel is fairly new so you have alooooooooooooooooot of things to impovehello would it be possible to get a review on the channel me and friend have set up, only started up on the 7th of july any feedback or tips would be great, always trying to improve, thank you!
OK well its really awesome that you grew soo fast,you have like 20 subs in only 20 days and your channel is fairly new so you have alooooooooooooooooot of things to impove
1.Add a trailer
2.Enable custom layout
3.Add a trailer or add a video that bests describes your channel (I would recommend putting a trailer)
4.Add some playlists...i dont know if you adsded it because you havent enabled custom layout (I believe that is what gives channels the different tabs like Video Home Discussion Description ,,,etc).Ok NVM i just say the "Created Playlists" in your homepage
5.Add a description...again cant see
6.Dont keep your logo as a a banner just enlarged
7.make your homepage more professional looking by adding more sections like Individual Playlists,Uploads,Popular videos and more(Trailer)
8.Add proper thumbnails. dont just take a screen shot from the video and put that....make a proper thumbnail to attract the viewer
9.well i would recommend using catchy names for videos instead of " *Insert games name* part 2 "
Like i said you have a lot of things to improve but hey everyone has to start somewhere and here is where you can start.Improve your channel and you will defiantly get a good audience
both of us have never done anything like this before, so all tips and advice is just what we need thanks again!
Thats the perfect attitude for a youtuber(well for anyone doing anything really xD )Brilliant! Thank for very much, lots of stuff to work on
ok right off the bat...xD loved the beginning of your trailer(The whole shake hand bit) however you added waaaay to many un-necessary details in it
Thanks for the advice I will definitely make a new trailer in the upcoming days and check out the video! I will also look at the discussion portion of my channel and see whats up there! Thanks!ok right off the bat...xD loved the beginning of your trailer(The whole shake hand bit) however you added waaaay to many un-necessary details in it
The trailer is basically introducing a new person to your channel.You dont have a to talk about you meeting new people,about said new people ...etc
All you need to do is have like a 30 sec trailer
Here is a link to George's Video for making trailer (It will help you quite a bit) :Good touch with the cards in the trailer as well
i would recommend adding the "Uploads" section on your homepage.Its a good thing you added your playlists there
Your thumbnails are fairly decent.I could easily read whatever was written on them However i felt that they werent exactly eye catching.You might want to work on the thumbnails a little bit more (Well many of your thumbnails were eye catching,just a few looked kinda dull)
Your audio was fine but it felt kinda off to me...i dont know why
YOU NEED TO IMPROVE YOUR DESCRIPTION!.Dude a description should Describe your channel...typing "why havent you subbed yet" is not good there xD.Add a proper description
Ok well i didnot check out the comments sections in your vids (i have a poor internet connection right and hence it takes aloooooot of time to load the comments section ) however i did check out your "Discussion" page and saw that you didnot talk to or reply to any of the 5 or 6 comments there
You should interact with your fans
Overall i would give your channel a 7/10
Ok dude your channel is fair new and seeing as you have 48 subs is impressive however that being said you REALLY need to make some improvements
Ok dude your channel is fair new and seeing as you have 48 subs is impressive however that being said you REALLY need to make some improvements
1.alright firstly,add a proper trailer rather than putting a video (which i assume is your recent one),or atleast put a trailer with some sort of vocals
2.Next,Add come sort of commentary to your videos on Clicker Hero coz you can actually get flagged for just showing the game without any commentary
3.Your audio was pretty good,quite clear and i could understand every word you said...good job there
4.DONT RE-USE THE SAME THUMBNAILS.i get that the video was part of a series but it is a veeeeery bad idea to have the same thumbnails for every video in a playlist/series
5.you should add the "Uploads" section on your homepage,not just the playlists (which was good...you added the playlists)
6.you should not reuse the channel logo as the channel banner (The banner looks fine but change your logo)
7.Your sub/view ratio is seriously weird,48 subs and only 38 views....something is off there xD.however i will give you the benefit of the doubt coz i added up ur views from each video and got an approx 320 views (20 per video).i feel like i should say this regardless,please dont do sub4sub(just thought of mentioning it)
8.the songs you used in your latest video (Clicker Hero),are you sure they are copyright free songs?coz otherise your channel might be in trouble
9.You added a playlist for unlisted video which i didnot understand why but hey you have your reasons(although it does not make any sense)
Just so you know Private videos cant be viewed by anyone other than you while Unlisted videos can be viewed by anyone who can access it (either by a link or,in your case,playlists)
10.this is just a personal opinion but i dont think you should clicker hero videos as you are doing them now(timelapsed with some background music),i feel it should be done with commentary (for 2 reasons,one is the flagging issue you could suffer and second is that it was kinda boring) and also see if your viewers are actually watching the whole video coz i doubt people are actually watching full 20 mins of the video
if you want a rating then i will have to give you a 5/10
You can defiantly improve and i KNOW you will
