@StormMoreno Hey, thanks i try to do the best reviews i can so lets get started
Channel Trailer: I like how it starts, the audio is a little loud, but that's probably because my speakers are a turned up a little too much xD Also do you use audacity to record your voice? cause you can edit it and export it as a .wav file straight into your editor, then sync it up and you'll have none of the slight background noice i'm hearing as it cuts in , Overall i like the trailer's content, I can understand what you're talking about and you feature alot of games that people like and will enjoy, but a minute is rather long, i'd say a good channel trailer needs to be around 30 seconds, a minute is fine, it's just many people have short attention spans Overall i'd say you could speedily run through everything in about 30 seconds I like the whole "get on the train" thing too Many successful YouTubers have a little catchphrase to their subscribers! Also talk a little bit more about yourself, viewers love that they can engage personally to a youtuber i feel
Thumbnails: Honestly i see nothing needed to be changed here, it all looks great to me, not too much stuff in the background, the text is a good size and readable on my pc, not sure about phone maybe a few of them like the "best doctor ever" would need to be a tad bigger with the text But yeah, they're funny, they're related to the video. Thats all there is to say really
Channel art/Profile pic: I personally love your channel banner, it's really cool, my only slight pet peeve is that the guys face on the left is covered by the picture placement, it's YouTube's fault really for the location they put the profile pic, but maybe you could put a picture of your face as the profile pic to match with the guy xD that'd be pretty funny! Also, i like that you include links to social media on the banner too. Overall i like it.
Commentary/Videos: I watch a couple of seconds of the newest oblivion one, maybe you should cut out the little intro where you're checking if the recording is on haha It's alright but it's a small bit unprofessional the audio quality is actually pretty good, and the game sound is not too loud on this particular video (Oblivion part 16, just for ur reference). I'll watch a couple others and see if the sound is good on them Ah yes, in your software inc video it starts with your voice straight away, must've been just that one video haha, my bad Again on the other video's i checked the sound quality is great. The commentary is also fine at the moment. Could use a few more "meme" jokes in there, say as your commentating throw a few popular memes into the screen as your saying them, people love that ****.
I also notice a few silences during some of your commentating too, thats not entirely bad, as some it it's during text parts, which gives ur viewers time to read etc, but most YouTubers cut out most of that unless it's important plot points! As i've said earlier, people's attention span's are getting lower, so shorter video's are always great! My shorter 2 minute videos' tend to do alot better in views than my longer full gameplay video's
Descriptions/About page: Your descriptions are good, they include all of your social media links and they have credits to music etc used in the video While they aren't that long, such as not including much information about the video itself, some people have a view option on youtube that includes the first sentence below the video, try using the first sentence in the description to mention one of the best parts, or a little teaser into why they should click on your video, y'know? Your about page is actually fine, it's rare i find one filled out haha! but it could include a few more personal details, such as age + a GENERAL location, e.g. I've got mine as the country Wales, it's generalised so people can't find you, but they enjoy getting to know the person they're investing time into should they subscribe
Intro/Outro: You don't have an intro, which for some is fine, but a couple of seconds with a graphic logo can reallllllly help reinforce your brand in people's minds so if they see something similar to your logo they might remember it and check back up on your video's. I like the outro, it could use a bit more graphics, say maybe ask somebody on freedom to design some cool graphics for your outro? Like a storm or something that links people to your Channel Name aswell!
Generally i can see your channel going far friend, and you've earned a subscriber from me for all the video's you've managed to produce in a short time, i'm impressed friend Thanks for the kind words on my reviews, and keep enjoying making content
@Misleading Winks Thanks for the review mate! When I was making my channel trailer I did not think much about the ending get on the train. I just was like I need something to end it off, but I like it has a good impact. Also about my graphics I don't like asking people to do stuff for me, I want to try and make a channel and brand by myself so it truly represents who I am. By the way thanks for the review, I can't thank you enough for the great feedback.