Offering Critique

[MakePeaceNotWar24]

You already nailed what I said. Other than that, from what I can see, you seem to have a good grasp on a lot of the games you play, and knowledge is power when it comes to Youtube. I guess the only thing I would ask of you (which I need to do too) is make a few jokes here and there about stuff. It really helps keep interest. But I liked what you did, so I did leave a sub.

i try my best to make my videos entertaining but i like to keep a variety of what i play to suit everybody. cant have a channel based off 1 game or 1 idea it will get old and just get old for you. But thanks for the feedback man.

 

[Daniel Sørensen 2]

Could be awesome with some feedback
https://www.youtube.com/c/daltyappsmusic

 

[NoDragonsPlz]

Could be awesome with some feedback
https://www.youtube.com/c/daltyappsmusic

Nice! a music channel! First question: (is your stuff copyright free?) second question: (Have you met with Epidemic sound and Position Music to get your stuff on their website?)

Anyway, I like what you are doing with the music. Your channel art also looks very professional, so that's good.

 

[LtGeneralStore]

If you're still giving feedback could you check my channel out please?

https://www.youtube.com/user/LtGeneralStore