Request Is it really that bad?

AlaswadGaming

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Aug 24, 2016
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Hey guy i hope everyone having a amazing day. all i want to say is if you have the time can you check out my video and tell me what i need to improve on and how am i doing?

 

tippsy711

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Feb 20, 2016
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drake_loch
Your game volume is too loud, it clashes with your own voice. Your video player says HD, but you still have a black border around the video, meaning its scaled down, which could be a turn off for some people. Honestly, the repetition gets old really quick. I also took a look at your channel and I noticed your thumbnails. They could be improved, one of them has a spelling mistake. They aren't eye catching at all, not a lot of effort put into them.
 

AlaswadGaming

Active Member
Freedom! Member
Aug 24, 2016
59
9
26
YouTube
Your game volume is too loud, it clashes with your own voice. Your video player says HD, but you still have a black border around the video, meaning its scaled down, which could be a turn off for some people. Honestly, the repetition gets old really quick. I also took a look at your channel and I noticed your thumbnails. They could be improved, one of them has a spelling mistake. They aren't eye catching at all, not a lot of effort put into them.
thanks for the honest truth