Gaming CLICK BAIT SIMULATOR

MichaelBytes

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I like how your intro is. My problem here is your first line of Dialogue

"hello guys, Welcome to another lets play"

My real issue the second half.
being "welcome to another lets play"

It makes you sound like everyone is doing a lets play

while yes its true a lot of people do lets play you don't want to blend in with the crowd.
And you might want to change your thumbnails up to be slightly more unique I get that it depicts the game,but doesn't really flash hey come watch my videos
 

DTACGaming

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I like how your intro is. My problem here is your first line of Dialogue

"hello guys, Welcome to another lets play"

My real issue the second half.
being "welcome to another lets play"

It makes you sound like everyone is doing a lets play

while yes its true a lot of people do lets play you don't want to blend in with the crowd.
And you might want to change your thumbnails up to be slightly more unique I get that it depicts the game,but doesn't really flash hey come watch my videos

I say "welcome to another let's play" because i am mostly a let's play channel and as you can see this isn't my first let's play......
 

DTACGaming

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Try one of these:
  • What happens in the video?
  • What did you like?
  • What did you not like?
  • Who are you as a creator?
  • Did anything extraordinary happen during recording, editing, etc?
  • Why should we care?
  • What sets this video apart from the other millions on YouTube?
3-5 sentances is best. it may take a few extra moments per post but believe me when youve built steady search traffic over time you'll be glad you spent that extra 1-3 minutes per upload.