I like how your intro is. My problem here is your first line of Dialogue
"hello guys, Welcome to another lets play"
My real issue the second half.
being "welcome to another lets play"
It makes you sound like everyone is doing a lets play
while yes its true a lot of people do lets play you don't want to blend in with the crowd.
And you might want to change your thumbnails up to be slightly more unique I get that it depicts the game,but doesn't really flash hey come watch my videos