I don't know if it's just me but the camera being in the top left just feels foreign to me! As most creators put it in the top right. Something to think about!
Your introduction started of well and then it ended! Try to drag it on and add give a quick recap of the previous episode!
I did pick up that you seem like you have a good sense of humor and I believe that will get you far! Just try to speak up a little or maybe turn down the game sound and turn up your audio!
Great video I wish you the best my friend!