Review4Review Stick Animation Video review

TwilightAlpha

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Apr 12, 2016
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Hello! Yesterday I uploaded my first stick animation on YouTube and I'd like to know what you guys think about it.
Should I make it longer,around 5 mins?Is it not smooth enough?What do you think about the thumbnail?Is it too fast?Too much action,not enough talking? It is a little rushed and the voice acting is bad,but I worked hard to make it.