Somebody, please rate my video?

[Nathan Jenkins (Nath042)]

Hey all,

I am trying to grow my channel, its not happening very fast but it is steady, I would like to perfect my videos as much as possible. Can someone leave me some criticism?

- Dirt 3

- Fallout New Vegas

- Minecraft

Thanks alot! I will be browsing this forum to view other videos too!

Nath042

 

[Nightcover]

Okay I like your style and your voice. There is heavy background noise from your mic which you should try to remove using software (audacity can do this). I think your end-card is awesome.