Skyrim Lets Play, Thoughts/Suggestions?

[MarketMan]

Hello! And thank you for taking the time to click this thread <3

I started a Skyrim lets play, and i was hoping for some thoughts/suggestions on how to make the series, and by extension, my videos much better!

Is it good? Bad?
Entertaining? Boring?
******? Goodish?

Any thoughts are welcome!

 

[Nightcover]

Hey I really liked the video and It's cool your are multiple people commentating.