Request Review my video and would like feedback

[Vent3r]

Hi guys I would like some feedback on my new video and see if you guys would like it and if there is something I can do better.

 

[RareFrost]

nice but i dont play that game

 

[Vent3r]

Just wanted to know if the quality was good of it.

 

[Mystic CRO]

Alright...like this. I may not be a professional at this but here is my opinion.

• Quality is GOOD
• Lack of Intro
• The Outro is a simple ''jump'', by that i mean, perhaps add some effect, as in...fade out the game recording, and fade in an outro?
• Maybe get a new outro? There are plenty of people willing to make you an intro or outro.

Overall, fine by me. But thats just my individual opinion.