Request Review My Latest Video!

fattmat

Devourer of Cake + Crumpets.
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May 8, 2014
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I want into depth criticism. I want to improve as much as possible.

Here's my latest video
You used the word really a decent chunk when you started the video, but you can say anything you want :p It sounds like you're excited to tell your story, that's great! Some of your words blend in together at times though. With a slightly slower speed, you can expand upon words easier. I feel like you have a strong feel over your videos now. It just takes experience now, and to learn from every experience ^^
 
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