I want into depth criticism. I want to improve as much as possible.
Here's my latest video
You used the word really a decent chunk when you started the video, but you can say anything you want
It sounds like you're excited to tell your story, that's great! Some of your words blend in together at times though. With a slightly slower speed, you can expand upon words easier. I feel like you have a strong feel over your videos now. It just takes experience now, and to learn from every experience ^^