Request Please review my video!

[Mark Patterson]

Hi everyone I need help. I just recorded my first BF1 gameplay and did a little bit of editing and tried to turn it into a funny video. Could you guys review it please:

 

[VloggingWithIanDominic]

Cool editing! But next time, I wanna see an intro and outro.

 

[Mark Patterson]

I will look into that! thank you for your feedback

 

[FunwJoan]

I think it's great, but same as dominic, i think It would be even better with an intro and outro