Request Please review me!

[bubbo2000]

Hey I have recently come back to youtube and I want to know what I could fix or do to make my channel better! let me know http://www.youtube.com/bubbo2000

 

[Mardy Rooster]

Your channel layout is great! Your banner looks good as well.
Your commentary is a little low try turning it up a little bit.
Also show emotions man! When you die get frustrated!