Request Looking for honest feedback on my latest videos!

[RatbagGaming2]

this is my latest video and im looking for honest feedback not just great vid or nice work! any feedback is good feedback i am all ears.

 

[Louisse Subido]

Well as for what I can gather. I want you to put more sound effects everytime you got hit and then put some montages everytime you die. put your camera on the lower right of the screen. Also do some lower third promotions, notations. and feel the cuss more and get rage hahaha. (optional: rage)

 

[RatbagGaming2]

Well as for what I can gather. I want you to put more sound effects everytime you got hit and then put some montages everytime you die. put your camera on the lower right of the screen. Also do some lower third promotions, notations. and feel the cuss more and get rage hahaha. (optional: rage)

thank you! very herlpful!

 

[Louisse Subido]

Hope that works man! Good luck!