Gaming Is this a good channel's trailer !?

[Solo Fraggers]

Hello guys , yesterday i make this video with my friend , it's like a short resume about what we are going to provide in our gaming channel .
i'll consider every comment here to improve my work quality and other stuff . Thank you

 

[Giggles]

Its pretty good but its hard to hear what your saying and the start was all blurry so there was nothing to look at :/ i really liked the games part tho.. but the ending was a little to much like pewdiepie lol

 

[TeeGee]

Hey guys! I really enjoyed the second half where you showcased all the games you play in like a mini montage style. I think the first part is a bit odd because of the blurriness.

 

[TheApexPlayer]

The montage at the end was good but the blurry gameplay at the start was unesesary

 

[Solo Fraggers]

Thanks for the advices ! working to make it better ^^ <3