Gaming Is my english good ?

[Ultimate]

Hey, so i need your help please tell me on 10scale how good my english is on this video

realy need your feedback

 

[GoldenGamer]

It's okay

 

[Ultimate]

It's okay

Rly ? so you can understand what i'm saying ?

 

[GoldenGamer]

I would say you need to sound more euthanstic(meaning excitement in your voice) you sound pretty dull in the video. Also try lower down your minecraft sound since it's pretty loud and annoying. Just here to help.

 

[Ultimate]

I would say you need to sound more euthanstic(meaning excitement in your voice) you sound pretty dull in the video. Also try lower down your minecraft sound since it's pretty loud and annoying. Just here to help.

Okey! I needed that feedback so i can fix and to thing better

 

[GoldenGamer]

Just think of it as if it was another YouTuber and you were watching the video what would you do to improve it and make the people watch more of it. That helps.