Request Is My Editing Somewhat Amusing?

[TheBirdGP]

Im not sure if its really a unique style but I usually do prefer to do it this way seeing as I think it is somewhat more funny and is just a blatant form of comedy in videos give me opinions on what you think about it it'd really help for the future.

 

[AstoraFPS]

I watched the video and here is my advice, the in your face text is kind of obnoxious, that might just be me but it's really in you face and gets tired really fast, I would say move it to the bottom of the screen and maybe switch the colours up for each new person that is speaking, the gameplay and audio was great sounds and looks good, just try and make the video a bit more engaging with the text etc, have a good one!