Entertainment Intro for new visitors! what you think?

[Robin “Williams” Muscato]

My video editor crash like 10 to 15 time before I made this. Text bug. lol. Anyway, what do you think?
btw, there a typo in my name -.-

 

[The Ghost]

Wow great work! Caught my attention

 

[Robin “Williams” Muscato]

Wow great work! Caught my attention

well, that is the idea and thank.