Comedy I'm REALLY PROUD of this video! What do you think?

[YanLikesStuff]

So I've been going on and off from youtube. But I feel like everytime I come back, there's more improvement.

This video in particular is very recent. But I think a lot of my editing and comedy was on point. Of course there's room for improvement. What do you think?

 

[Mokenister]

Lol, I gotta admit that was pretty funny, and you should do more vids edited like this, but I think you should be louder/talk more because even though your editing and humor was on point, you don't really talk much :3 Don't take it as an offense, take it as a tip to improve your channel and then I'm sure you'll get some nice feedback Keep it up!

 

[YanLikesStuff]

Lol, I gotta admit that was pretty funny, and you should do more vids edited like this, but I think you should be louder/talk more because even though your editing and humor was on point, you don't really talk much :3 Don't take it as an offense, take it as a tip to improve your channel and then I'm sure you'll get some nice feedback Keep it up!

Thanks a lot! I'll keep your tip in mind. :3