Request How's My Commentary?

[Chromenized]

Hello everyone! I don't really have a specific video that I would like to have some review on, however, if you guys could review my commentary on my videos that would be great.

My channel: www.youtube.com/chromenized

If you could just check out a few of my videos there and tell me how to improve my commentary, that would be great. I try to have enthusiasm and not be boring at any part in the video. All feedback is appreciated!

Thanks.

 

[luanroxgamer]

I have to admit , his voice is excellent for gameplays !
why do not you try to focus on game strategies and fps ? his voice fits very well , great ton of voice!

 

[Chromenized]

I have to admit , his voice is excellent for gameplays !
why do not you try to focus on game strategies and fps ? his voice fits very well , great ton of voice!

Thank you so much! I appreciate it!

 

[SlenderSlay]

Voice is perfect, but if I have to be honest the intro makes me cringe.

 

[Chromenized]

Voice is perfect, but if I have to be honest the intro makes me cringe.

Thank you for the feedback. I wasn't a huge fan of the intro either but thought i'd keep it for some reason xD

 

[RareFrost]

gg da voice

 

[Chromenized]

gg da voice

I appreciate the feedback