How does my intro look?

[StealthyWolf52]

I want you to keep in mind 2 things
1: There is music fading out after this clip to ease into the video.
2: I like having a longer intro, or did not mind this one being longer, simply because my videos are longer in general, it is a representation of what will be found on my channel in a way.

 

[Moranda-Media]

one of the better ones i seen on hear. the end need to ramp down and now just cut. maybe do a zoom in to one video and slow the song down. or have it end befor it zooms all the way in. if you cant edit the music find a diffent you can cut it too. this is a good one i did for a firend.