Hey Freedom! community, I need some feedback :)

[VoidStarzZHD]

Hello again, VoidStarzZHD here, I wanted to see how my FIFA 16 videos are doing so far, like if I should keep doing what i'm doing, or speak louder, or speak more, etc. No good creator can ever get better by critiquing themselves, so i'm asking the Freedom! community

Here's the video, you don't have to watch the whole thing, I just want an opinion on how I did and where I should improve.

 

[VoidStarzZHD]

If you want to be harsh, you can be, all support helps

 

[PablosCorner1]

Hi, VoidStarzZHD:

From the video:

Great graphics, good sound, good commentary and interaction with the game so far.

FIFA games are great these days, so continue doing this and experiment with new games

any help you need, count on me to help.

 

[Jonathan]

This would get a better response in the community reviews section as people who look there review stuff all the time.

 

[VoidStarzZHD]

Hi, VoidStarzZHD:

From the video:

Great graphics, good sound, good commentary and interaction with the game so far.

FIFA games are great these days, so continue doing this and experiment with new games

any help you need, count on me to help.

Thank you

 

[VoidStarzZHD]

This would get a better response in the community reviews section as people who look there review stuff all the time.

Oh ok, my next video I'll put it in that forum, thanks