Request Give thoughts on video

[Menzie]

I'm trying to get back into YouTube after a break from it. This is my first upload since then, please be brutally honest on how I can improve on this video. Any passing remarks both good and bad from audio to gameplay footage or just general thoughts. Thanks
Please note though, my mic is dying.

 

[Nick Plays]

they are absolutely great!! just give some more time on thumbnails and give good titles on ur vids

 

[Dana Vaneck]

it looks great and was very enertaining keep it up i subbed

 

[Menzie]

they are absolutely great!! just give some more time on thumbnails and give good titles on ur vids

it looks great and was very enertaining keep it up i subbed

Thanks for the feedback. It really helps