(Feedback Wanted) LiftMotion Intro

[Brickpro]

Hey guys, I am woking on this intro, I love it except I feel like something isn't right.

If you guys can think of anything that might make it better, let me know!

 

[PunkJax]

It's missing a bit of snap at the drop. The animation should start slowly (like it is right now), but right when the beat drops it snaps into place much quicker. Also the secondary tilt is a bit superfluous? It's too slow to fit with the beat, anyway. If you do want to add something during that part of the intro, it should move and snap back into place much quicker.

 

[TaintedSoldiers]

It's missing a bit of snap at the drop. The animation should start slowly (like it is right now), but right when the beat drops it snaps into place much quicker. Also the secondary tilt is a bit superfluous? It's too slow to fit with the beat, anyway. If you do want to add something during that part of the intro, it should move and snap back into place much quicker.

I think he was going for a subtle approach.

 

[Brickpro]

I am going for a 2nd try, and I like it a bit better.

 

[PunkJax]

I think he was going for a subtle approach.

I feel that the song doesn't suit that, then. Though if he wants to go subtle on the movement, there are other things he can make pop with the beat (color/saturation, camera placement, other faster effects?).

I am going for a 2nd try, and I like it a bit better.

Looking forward to seeing it!

 

[Bryan]

Flashy! I love this, I wish I can do something similar haha. One thing you should consider is the length of intros. For me, I don't like intros that are longer than 5 seconds. Most intros now are very short. But that's just what I'm thinking

 

[TwilightPrinze]

Like the intro and the music part is already mentioned so i'll skip that. How is progress going on your second try?