Gaming Did I Seriously Die in an AIRPORT?! - Unturned LP

[Artsy Irvine]

Hey #FreedomFamily! I've started a new series on my channel. Unturned.
Not much people have been playing this recently, most let's plays I've seen are from 2 years ago. And since this game has improved so much over the years, I thought that maybe I should make a series too.

Would love some feedback on:
-Video Quality
-Text timing
-What can I improve on
-How much do you think will be better if I added commentary?

Thanks guys!

 

[Hayzeon]

Doing something this good with only text is respectable!
Video quality doesn't need to be improved but commentary would for sure up the overall quality!

 

[Artsy Irvine]

Doing something this good with only text is respectable!
Video quality doesn't need to be improved but commentary would for sure up the overall quality!

Thanks so much for your feedback! I have considered doing commentary but I think I should invest on a good mic first