best explaination at the beginning lol, but in al seriousness tho i haven't played dota so its hard for me to say anything about the gaming but the commentary is kinda dull, definitely try and not be so monotone get more expressive man!
Yea...you sound pretty bored. I'm personally not a fan of the full game commentary style, and Baumi already has that saturated market for Dota 2. If I were you, I'd try to approach videos more creatively and grab the viewers attention.