Hey man, overall your video's not bad. The one thing I would recommend, is for some reason you sound as if you're whispering. Now you may just have a soft voice, and that's why It sounds that way, which is fine but just be a bit more lively IMO. If you don't sound excited or happy to play a game the audience may not get behind it.
Another thing is your title, it's a bit long and you don't put in the game name which helps with YouTube algorithms. You could do something like - "Android Buffet | Dragon Ball Xenoverse 2" short and somewhat relative to your content. Another thing is make sure to add your "HypeTheGamer" in your tags. That is specific to you and if anyone searches that name, these videos have a better chance at being found.
That;s about it. Keep at it man. This is actually I game I wanted to try out myself.