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Donavon Hype

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Hey guys I'm a new YouTuber I don't know much but is there anything I can do to improve my videos


anyways plz help
 

HealPleaseHeal

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Hey man, overall your video's not bad. The one thing I would recommend, is for some reason you sound as if you're whispering. Now you may just have a soft voice, and that's why It sounds that way, which is fine but just be a bit more lively IMO. If you don't sound excited or happy to play a game the audience may not get behind it.

Another thing is your title, it's a bit long and you don't put in the game name which helps with YouTube algorithms. You could do something like - "Android Buffet | Dragon Ball Xenoverse 2" short and somewhat relative to your content. Another thing is make sure to add your "HypeTheGamer" in your tags. That is specific to you and if anyone searches that name, these videos have a better chance at being found.

That;s about it. Keep at it man. This is actually I game I wanted to try out myself.

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Mardy Rooster

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Hype up the beginning! Sound excited! Also there is a lot of pauses in your commentary. This is not a bad thing, Although a faint music background could help keep the viewer interested during the fight scenes! Better yet, you could play some war music during the fight scenes to help immerse the viewer! Other than that nice videos man :D

If you could offer me any advice on one of my videos that would be awesome!