Request can you tell me if this is good

Lost Trigger

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the music/effects are ok and can help make the video a bit more interesting but the gameplay itself isnt very interesting atleast to me
 

BlueBard

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I think it's a bit too much for what it tries t convey. Rather just show it as is. Too much editing can dilute the effect you're going for :)