Request Can you review this video?

[Michael Aquila]

Please give me your honest opinion
Don't kill me though (I know I'm bad)
Thanks a lot

 

[Louisse Subido]

Try to add more emotion to yourself as if it was you "The Character" and you feeling it. add some cinematic editing "montages,comedic sketch, rages."

 

[Amadeus Videos]

I love this video man, maybe make your camera screen a bit smaller so we can see more of the game itself

 

[CptRussia]

I like how with such a small channel, you show your face. pretty nice
As for the video it self, its pretty well made, good quality, you talk alot which is good. Keeps the audiences attention

Overall very nice