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[ViceClan]

plz comment on the vid so i can see it and reply

 

[Mark Aquiapao]

I like the music and ending part! What could be better is use some special effects like slow motion and some flares. You should make the video more quick paced by cutting the clips so it goes straight into your kills in the game instead of waiting for it to happen. Also, the beginning was really slow I think you should trim that part or add different clips.