Request Can You Review My edit

GLa5s

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GLa5s
Some of the edits were awesome. I don't know about the green screen. Can you not just use the current frame instead of the green screen? My opinion anyways. Too much of the glitch also seems like it could be annoying so not sure if this is just a snip of your video, but if there is a lot of that then I would back off a bit. If you are still trying to stick with the suspenseful nature then maybe more slow motion could be your friend. I am by no means an expert, but I have watched enough montages to at least be an above average viewer.
 

Mark Aquiapao

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I like the fast pace and squeeze effect of the editing! It keeps the audience engaged. The green/blue screen looks very choppy though. I would suggest using flares instead to give it that professional look and also use slow motion 2-3 times(don't overdo it).