Request Can u review this video

[EMighty Gamer]

Hey i just upload a video and the first days it was going well and i share it in other website and he got spotlight of the day but the last 2 days i just got 3 dislikes on YouTube and i don't know why ? A review will be nice and i can take critics. here is the video -

 

[Crazylawrence]

Hello EMighty Gamer

Don't worry about dislikes heavily when you are only starting.
I have checked your video out and the appropriate feedback of my opinion is below.

• Your Outro could be better, maybe ask someone to make a GFX package for a logo, banner and outro.
• You may lose viewers if the introduction is 20 seconds long. I mean that is nearly 10% of that whole video.
• Montages are quite hard to make really well, but try to refrain from using preset transitions.
• Overall, I liked the video, it would have been better if it was a game I enjoyed, but how it was made did intrigue me at first.

 

[EMighty Gamer]

Hello EMighty Gamer

Don't worry about dislikes heavily when you are only starting.
I have checked your video out and the appropriate feedback of my opinion is below.

• Your Outro could be better, maybe ask someone to make a GFX package for a logo, banner and outro.
• You may lose viewers if the introduction is 20 seconds long. I mean that is nearly 10% of that whole video.
• Montages are quite hard to make really well, but try to refrain from using preset transitions.
• Overall, I liked the video, it would have been better if it was a game I enjoyed, but how it was made did intrigue me at first.

Thank you ! i'll keep that in mind.