Request Art video; length and style?

[MemoGaming]

Hello!
I decided to do a little series for Christmas and I wanted some feedback on the first video to see what kinda things people like or dislike.

Specifically I would like to know:
- Do you like the video length? (its hard to know what length to make time-lapse drawings)
- Does the format of the video work? (Eg. into with talking, time lapse and music part, outro with cinematic shots)
- Is there anything that could be added to make it more interesting/appealing? (Maybe talking about how the drawing was done or what was used)

Thanks,
- Memo

 

[Fourth Wall Games]

Looks great, I like the idea of commentary over your drawings. Length is good in my opinion.

 

[TheMLGenies]

Length is absolutely fine.I really like the idea of having the commentary over your drawing, but here it sounds kinda like you're reading off a script. I would recommend that you take a more light-hearted/relaxed approach.