Tips & Tricks Any way I can improve my videos?

[Flokiii]

My first video I was hoping to get some constructive criticism

 

[nologic]

I'd invest in a USB condenser mic. Like Snowball or Blue Yeti. Sure it will take some extra time to edit, but hearing people talk and interact is way more fun and more engaging to watch.
I would do it myself, but right now I'm having tight of space in my room i'm renting. >.<

 

[MANELENOIROMANIA]

It a good video, i liked it. You need to do a good SEO for it !