Request Am I cringey? Video Feedback Request!

[IndieBin]

Hey Freedom!

So I believe there's a fine line between exuberant and cringey. Perhaps cringe is in the eye of the beholder, I don't know. But it'd be a massive help if maybe some of you guys took the time to review my latest video and tell me what you thought?

Most notably, I do live action segments. These include filming in front of a camera and, considering I'm not the greatest cinematographer or actor, some of these segments don't always come out the way I envisioned them in my head. For example, in my video, I tweaked the contrast so much it looks like I'm radioactive!

I get a lot of feedback from friends saying I'm great and under-appreciated, but that sort of feedback doesn't help me grow. So if you guys could take a look at the video and give me a few pointers; tell me what made you laugh, what didn't, what drew you out of the video? That would be a HUGE help!

Thanks in advance, guys!

 

[LifeWithjason]

I could watch your videos and be entertained keep going man you got a sub

 

[Gaming with Jennifer]

This is a good style of video - I liked it, so you got a sub from me. However this particular video felt a bit too long, and I was honestly starting to lose interest at about 4mins as it was starting to get a bit samey. If this was a highly anticipated game, I would have definitely kept watching though! I can see you put a lot of work into it, and it definitely pays off as all the different photos and clips really keeps the pace going. The sarcasm is definitely my sort of humour The only constructive thing I can really say is cut it down a bit, especially on a small game like this!

 

[IndieBin]

This is a good style of video - I liked it, so you got a sub from me. However this particular video felt a bit too long, and I was honestly starting to lose interest at about 4mins as it was starting to get a bit samey. If this was a highly anticipated game, I would have definitely kept watching though! I can see you put a lot of work into it, and it definitely pays off as all the different photos and clips really keeps the pace going. The sarcasm is definitely my sort of humour The only constructive thing I can really say is cut it down a bit, especially on a small game like this!

Man, TELL me about it! I planned for this video to be 8 minutes, tops.

I really do think I can get way too into my scripting XD Besides, it'd probably help with my video release times.

This is my main show, where about 50% of my effort goes. I have shorter reviews for games that'll offer less material, called Q-Reviews. And then I do some sketch stuff and that on the side, but this is my main series.

I will try to cut down a bit. But the style I'm going for is like JonTron or BrutalMoose. These episodes are meant to be more comical and flippant than my Q-Review series, that is a bit more informative.

But thank you so much for the critique! I will try my hardest to cut down XD

 

[fattmat]

Hey Freedom!

So I believe there's a fine line between exuberant and cringey. Perhaps cringe is in the eye of the beholder, I don't know. But it'd be a massive help if maybe some of you guys took the time to review my latest video and tell me what you thought?

Most notably, I do live action segments. These include filming in front of a camera and, considering I'm not the greatest cinematographer or actor, some of these segments don't always come out the way I envisioned them in my head. For example, in my video, I tweaked the contrast so much it looks like I'm radioactive!

I get a lot of feedback from friends saying I'm great and under-appreciated, but that sort of feedback doesn't help me grow. So if you guys could take a look at the video and give me a few pointers; tell me what made you laugh, what didn't, what drew you out of the video? That would be a HUGE help!

Thanks in advance, guys!

Music might be a little too loud alongside your voice for your introduction.

 

[IndieBin]

Music might be a little too loud alongside your voice for your introduction.

Audio was never my strong suite XD

Thing is, EVERY time I do a new video, I forget something. This time, it was audio mixing. I could have increased the volume of my recorded voice in Audacity and then levelled everything accordingly. This time, I just hushed it together. I seem to really rush at the end.

Mental note for next time though!

 

[fattmat]

Audio was never my strong suite XD

Thing is, EVERY time I do a new video, I forget something. This time, it was audio mixing. I could have increased the volume of my recorded voice in Audacity and then levelled everything accordingly. This time, I just hushed it together. I seem to really rush at the end.

Mental note for next time though!

Hah, I know what you mean. I feel like I lower my volume too low for music now, because I get hesitant on messing with the volumes. No worries though, it takes a lot of time to master, but it's not a dealbreaker since it wasn't a huge difference