A video type I don't often do, can I get people's opinions?

[ShadowMajor]

Hi there guys, so I don't do gaming videos an awful lot, but I want to start doing it more, can I get your opinions on the style of my latest one? Thanks in advance

 

[Trickyy Gaming Support]

I love that You are doing The video with "a Crew" and that theres a lot going on from The start of! an advise could be to put in a facecam if You feel confident showing your face showing your face in a video gives it so much more personality!