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hey guys i run a fifa channel with abt 35 subs please check my channel out and give me somw feedback abt my commentary and my editing ...also subscribe if ya like he videos please post youre channel links in the thread as well so i can review them

I made a video that I am fairly pleased with and I was wondering if anybody would like to spare some time and write about things I can improve on in this video. I am talking about things like 1. Commentary 2. Music 3. Entertainment 4. Eye catching thumbnail or attention grabbing 5. And anything...