Review4Review What do i need to improve on?

[Notorious Dex]

Hi guys, I just want for you guys to look at my video and the rest of my channel and tell me how it is. I know its not perfect so I will have to improve, but I just need to know what I need to improve on. I will also review others that want me to review them! Thanks in advance!

 

[Retractable]

the audio is all over the place i would recommend using an equalizer! The intro needs to go, you don't need it "your content speaks for it self" try to speed up your intro i'm already 38 seconds in and getting bored, try to keep your audience attracted. My rule of thumb is, would you watch through the whole thing your self. Make cuts in between you making shots, i think your video is really good just some improvements on editing! you have a really nice thing here, a good amount of subs, banner art is good but would recommend taking off your twitter name on your banner they can just click the bottom right. Good luck and check out my channel maybe we can collab some time https://www.youtube.com/c/redxio

 

[Mardy Rooster]

Make a channel trailer full of your awesome moments! Grasp the visitors attention!

 

[viality13]

the audio is all over the place i would recommend using an equalizer! The intro needs to go, you don't need it "your content speaks for it self" try to speed up your intro i'm already 38 seconds in and getting bored, try to keep your audience attracted. My rule of thumb is, would you watch through the whole thing your self. Make cuts in between you making shots, i think your video is really good just some improvements on editing! you have a really nice thing here, a good amount of subs, banner art is good but would recommend taking off your twitter name on your banner they can just click the bottom right. Good luck and check out my channel maybe we can collab some time https://www.youtube.com/c/redxio

I agree it just seems like your talking to yourself and not engaging the audience

 

[zerkcrator]

I would recommend to engage with the audience more and try making your audio better.