Some Feedback On A Review

[Kim_TheVIReviewer]

Hello everyone, I would appreciate some feedback on my Dirty Bomb review, it is the first review that I have done this way and I would like to seen what people think about it. Also I have changed thumbnail design for this video (I plan on using it in my videos after this)(and that certainly isn't because I moved away to University and Left the original images at home) what do you think of it?

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Thank you!

 

[moncif ait ahmed]

hhhh i like the intro was so funny

 

[ThInKk12]

Boost you mic Volume, unless your really soft spoken..

 

[K-Gifted]

I think your review could've been a little bit better organized. Maybe have categories such as gameplay features, what you liked/didn't like about the game etc. I don't know if you were poking fun at the game for kicking you out of matches and not being able to connect but I thought that part was pretty funny. I think you did a good job on making this review different in your own way. I Just think getting it more organized would definitely help.