Request Is my first video up to scratch?

travisdoesstuff

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I am just starting up YouTube and put a lot of effort into my first video, I need to know what I did well what I did wrong (if anything :p) and what I should do more of or less of for future videos. Or at least anything you have to say about it :)
 

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Wow that's a really great video! I was gonna try to give you some feedback on how to improve your videos but this is top quality content already. You did a really good job on the editing, I wouldn't be able to do it better myself. I'm curious to see what your next video is going to be like.
 

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Wow that's a really great video! I was gonna try to give you some feedback on how to improve your videos but this is top quality content already. You did a really good job on the editing, I wouldn't be able to do it better myself. I'm curious to see what your next video is going to be like.
Thank you so much it means a lot to know i'm doing the right thing and people enjoy it, and in my opinion my next video is even better (it comes out on April 1st).
 

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I am just starting up YouTube and put a lot of effort into my first video, I need to know what I did well what I did wrong (if anything :p) and what I should do more of or less of for future videos. Or at least anything you have to say about it :)
You have a specific demographic for people that will like your channel. But, between the cuts, you have a change in tone at times, like you revved up your engine, held in a deep breath, to say your sentence. The comment about girls "personalities" might be offputting, but that just depends on the younger people watching your video.
 

travisdoesstuff

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You have a specific demographic for people that will like your channel. But, between the cuts, you have a change in tone at times, like you revved up your engine, held in a deep breath, to say your sentence. The comment about girls "personalities" might be offputting, but that just depends on the younger people watching your video.
Yeah I was worried about some of the jokes such as that one coming off as kind of rude, but I am trying to aim for a higher age group of people who would probably understand that its supposed to be a joke and is far from what I am actually like. In terms of the cuts that was on purpose however I want to know is it a good or bad thing? Anyway I appreciate your comment as it is useful to get opinions from different perspectives.
 

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Yeah I was worried about some of the jokes such as that one coming off as kind of rude, but I am trying to aim for a higher age group of people who would probably understand that its supposed to be a joke and is far from what I am actually like. In terms of the cuts that was on purpose however I want to know is it a good or bad thing? Anyway I appreciate your comment as it is useful to get opinions from different perspectives.
So you're going for satire? It depends on the audience, I feel the younger people would find it more entertaining. If you know what you're doing, you'll attract a different amount of people. I was just curious if you were aware on a few considerations. It's not inherently bad, but some people do things they are unaware of.
 

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So you're going for satire? It depends on the audience, I feel the younger people would find it more entertaining. If you know what you're doing, you'll attract a different amount of people. I was just curious if you were aware on a few considerations. It's not inherently bad, but some people do things they are unaware of.
Well I say higher age group as in I don't want a bunch of 9 year olds XD. I think in later videos I will watch the cuts, it was probably just me trying to keep up with a fast pace i'll probably learn as I go along.
 

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Well I say higher age group as in I don't want a bunch of 9 year olds XD. I think in later videos I will watch the cuts, it was probably just me trying to keep up with a fast pace i'll probably learn as I go along.
Yeah, take everything day by day, because they might end up pulling the crown in :p It's good to see what works for you personally.