Is my channel bad?

[D4RKDamage]

I would like to ask the freedom family, to please check out a video on my channel and give me some brutal honesty and constructive criticism :
What I'm doing wrong
what I should do
Any improvements
Audio ok?
Video quality ok?
etc...

Thanks

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[RaspberrySlice]

Try be a bit louder in your video, but other than that your videos are great

 

[D4RKDamage]

Try be a bit louder in your video, but other than that your videos are great

Thanks I recently got a new mic, it was quiet cause otherwise there would be a loud humming noise!