Request How well did I do?

Dennis Gromov

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I would like to know how good or bad my commentating is (Feel free to look at my other videos for more info on my commentating) and what I can improve on.
Here is the latest video:
 

fattmat

Devourer of Cake + Crumpets.
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May 8, 2014
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I would like to know how good or bad my commentating is (Feel free to look at my other videos for more info on my commentating) and what I can improve on.
Here is the latest video:
You could cut down on the first 25 seconds by going straight into the game. Using annotations can help describe everything during real time. You can possibly speed up the game as well to keep people engaged easier ^^