Hey please give me some feedback as this is my first rap produced ever and I wanna get as many opinions as possible. Also tag other rappers or artists if you can <3
LYRICS:
Yeah, I got a rap for you guys today
doing something new
and very very fast
[Chorus:]
Yeah, uh huh, you know what it is
I'll be rapping fast, I do it big
I do it daily, this is nothing new to me
I pull it off a lot, rapping fast with passion
Oh man I'm free
Its time to do this
time to do this [4x]
you all ready cuz?
Its time to do this
Time to do this [4x]
Yeaaahh
Man im rapping faster than Usain on the track,
I pop a couple of verses and do another lap,
1 lap, 2 lap, 3 lap 4,
you think i'm coming to an end but wait there's more,
better than before,
better than living,
worse than sinning and shitting on the bathroom floor,
like people talking crap behind my back but didn't know that I saw,
didn't know I gave a **** about the **** you say about the way I look
and the money you took from the people I adore,
like man you were wrong,
so I wrote this song,
cuz it got right to my ******* core,
all the signs are in your face,
but you still ignore.
Oh well, I don't give a damn,
I'll go with the flow, I don't need a plan,
don't think not, because I can,
you told me to walk, so I ran,
I don't need to listen,
why try to learn when theirs no competition,
why try to learn when i've already risen
already at the top,
already on my game,
I can do what I do,
without the ******* fame
[Chorus:]
Yeah, uh huh, you know what it is
I'll be rapping fast, I do it big
I do it daily, this is nothing new to me
I pull it off a lot, rapping fast with passion
Oh man I'm free
Its time to do this
time to do this [4x]
you all ready cuz?
Its time to do this
Time to do this [4x]
Yeaaahh
[Verse:]
Dunno the words,
still am driven,
I forgot em all but follow the rhythm,
I follow the rhyme while keeping in time,
and hope I made the right decison
and hope I took the path,
the one thats right and will last,
the one that'll bring good fortune and karma to those who wrong,
while I travel along this merry road,
to find where I belong,
to find it all while keeping my cool,
and none of this ******** you see in school,
making everyone play the same,
when we all play a different game,
I will use my voice to make a change,
when they think its sunny,
I will make it rain
[Chorus:]
Yeah, uh huh, you know what it is
I'll be rapping fast, I do it big
I do it daily, this is nothing new to me
I pull it off a lot, rapping fast with passion
Oh man I'm free
Its time to do this
time to do this [4x]
you all ready cuz?
Its time to do this
Time to do this [4x]
Yeaaahh
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