review mcn

I would like you guys to review a video I just recently posted today! Tell me what you think needs improvements and whats good! Thank you all! :)

after hours of editing I made it. a whole review about freedom! do you all wanna watch this video tell me what you think about it? and I know I fergot to tell some details but I guess I told the important things right? and also please give me feedback about what I need to do better next time if...