Requesting feedback on my video

TheCrestedPenguin

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Freedom! Member
Apr 1, 2014
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So i've never really edited video's allot, I only do the very basics. But in my last video i tried to up my game, Also with the intro's and my voice i tried to up it a bit. Please tell me what i can improve and what you liked thank you.